My first and last Triolet

[ICSoria]

I have never really been happy with it either, so have at it. I have developed thick skin as regards criticism so don't worry...I won't go postal on you.

Denied

To know that place where wondrous dreams reside
Beyond the golden door that guards your heart,
I'd take love's key and lock mine all inside
To know that place where wondrous dreams reside
Set free emotions we had been denied
Within despondent days we'd been apart.
To know that place where wondrous dreams reside
Beyond the golden door that guards your heart.

©2008