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Grandmother
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07-21-2011, 06:33 AM
Thank you for your feedback guys
 Leanne, I will change "lining" to "that line" in a moment. And yes Todd, in my dialect too "shard" rhymes with "promenade".
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Grandmother - by heslopian - 07-21-2011, 02:22 AM
RE: Grandmother - by Todd - 07-21-2011, 03:58 AM
RE: Grandmother - by Leanne - 07-21-2011, 04:39 AM
RE: Grandmother - by Todd - 07-21-2011, 05:25 AM
RE: Grandmother - by heslopian - 07-21-2011, 06:33 AM
RE: Grandmother - by billy - 07-21-2011, 08:25 AM
RE: Grandmother - by addy - 07-21-2011, 03:59 PM
RE: Grandmother - by Aish - 07-24-2011, 06:12 AM
RE: Grandmother - by heslopian - 07-24-2011, 06:35 PM
RE: Grandmother - by critical mass - 07-24-2011, 09:52 PM
RE: Grandmother - by heslopian - 07-24-2011, 10:28 PM
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