07-21-2011, 04:51 AM
Haha, well, aren't you the tolerant one? 
(We don't normally do much critique in the fun section, but because I'm really anal about this sort of thing, the headless iamb in S2L1 could easily be re-headed with "she pouts"... feel free to ignore me though, it's just a bad habit I have!)
I've never actually tried one of these things, but I googled and discovered that I absolutely must. Thanks for the idea, and for the most enjoyable poem.
(We don't normally do much critique in the fun section, but because I'm really anal about this sort of thing, the headless iamb in S2L1 could easily be re-headed with "she pouts"... feel free to ignore me though, it's just a bad habit I have!)
I've never actually tried one of these things, but I googled and discovered that I absolutely must. Thanks for the idea, and for the most enjoyable poem.
It could be worse