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The Room
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07-18-2011, 09:47 AM
I love the simile you chose: "like a glass resting on the windowsill"... it evokes the emptiness that you expound on in the text of the poem, but of course there's the subtext that it could just break.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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RE: The Room - by Leanne - 07-18-2011, 04:44 AM
RE: The Room - by billy - 07-18-2011, 07:52 AM
RE: The Room - by addy - 07-18-2011, 09:47 AM
RE: The Room - by heslopian - 07-18-2011, 03:38 PM
RE: The Room - by Leanne - 07-18-2011, 04:38 PM
RE: The Room - by Todd - 07-19-2011, 10:48 AM
RE: The Room - by heslopian - 07-19-2011, 10:54 AM
RE: The Room - by ICSoria - 07-20-2011, 07:41 AM
RE: The Room - by heslopian - 07-20-2011, 08:02 AM
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