07-18-2011, 09:43 AM
Form-wise its perfect. I love "haggard womb" and "formless beasts", that underbelly of unease and unplaceable danger it creates... it's a great counterpoint to the image of dreams, which when not used properly can be ephemeral and even boringly meaningless without appropriate context. Nicely done.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?