07-18-2011, 09:33 AM
This is a stellar piece, Jack. You summed it up perfectly.
If I had to pick a small nit, imo the "...destroying our souls like tiny eggshells" sounds a little cliche, but come to think of it that might be intentional in context
If I had to pick a small nit, imo the "...destroying our souls like tiny eggshells" sounds a little cliche, but come to think of it that might be intentional in context
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?