07-18-2011, 07:52 AM
excellent effort jack.
if has an emptiness that evokes
the emotion. can't really give any constructive feedback apart
from asking if 'becomes' works better than 'is like'
nicelt done and thanks for the read.
if has an emptiness that evokes
the emotion. can't really give any constructive feedback apart
from asking if 'becomes' works better than 'is like'
nicelt done and thanks for the read.