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#3
07-17-2011, 07:53 AM
I took the comma out and put it back, it reads wrong without it, though I might change it to a colon. I'm still tossing up on whether or not to use end-line punctuation. I don't like inconsistencies either Smile

Thanks very much for your thoughtful comment, Jack.
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Messages In This Thread
Done - by Leanne - 07-17-2011, 07:29 AM
RE: Done - by heslopian - 07-17-2011, 07:39 AM
RE: Done - by Leanne - 07-17-2011, 07:53 AM
RE: Done - by heslopian - 07-17-2011, 08:10 AM
RE: Done - by Leanne - 07-17-2011, 08:13 AM
RE: Done - by heslopian - 07-17-2011, 08:32 AM
RE: Done - by billy - 07-17-2011, 08:46 AM
RE: Done - by Leanne - 07-17-2011, 08:55 AM
RE: Done - by billy - 07-17-2011, 09:00 AM
RE: Done - by addy - 07-18-2011, 09:43 AM
RE: Done - by Leanne - 07-18-2011, 09:50 AM
RE: Done - by ICSoria - 07-20-2011, 08:14 AM
RE: Done - by Leanne - 07-20-2011, 08:20 AM
RE: Done - by ICSoria - 07-20-2011, 02:13 PM
RE: Done - by critical mass - 07-24-2011, 11:22 PM
RE: Done - by Leanne - 07-25-2011, 09:54 AM



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