07-16-2011, 06:07 PM
I'm really glad you liked this Billy. This is the one short story I've written which I'm really satisfied with, I think because it came across as genuine instead of my usual undergraduate attempts at depth haha. I shall work on my repetition in my next piece, whenever that arrives
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe