07-15-2011, 12:25 PM
Would it make any difference if I attached the first line to the opening stanza instead of having it there on its own? Thanks for the feedback and kind words Bilbo
I'm sure you're smart enough to schmooze your way into a suit and fire family men if you had a mind to
Either that or you could get rich peddling your arse
I'm sure you're smart enough to schmooze your way into a suit and fire family men if you had a mind to Either that or you could get rich peddling your arse
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