07-13-2011, 08:51 AM
the poem feels introspective to a point of sadness.
the worry in it is toxic. and the feeling of self-worth is low.
the poem leads to the last verse which brings a shallower write
to a much deeper level. as a snippet come filler, the 2nd verse is excellent.
not too sure of the 3rd adding much but it that could just be me.
a good original poem.
thanks for the read
the worry in it is toxic. and the feeling of self-worth is low.
the poem leads to the last verse which brings a shallower write
to a much deeper level. as a snippet come filler, the 2nd verse is excellent.
not too sure of the 3rd adding much but it that could just be me.
a good original poem.
thanks for the read