07-11-2011, 08:53 AM
There's a violence in the words that definitely speaks of graffiti... an underground, rage against the machine vibe that really worked with the visual format you chose (It would, to me, read like a different poem without the visual). Very nicely done.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?