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Melancholia
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07-11-2011, 08:37 AM
(07-09-2011, 10:19 AM)Heslopian Wrote: Addy, would the last line of the penultimate verse make more grammatical sense if I separated "any" and "thing" into stand alone words?yes, that would work perfectly 
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Melancholia - by heslopian - 07-09-2011, 03:13 AM
RE: Melancholia - by Aish - 07-09-2011, 04:39 AM
RE: Melancholia - by Leanne - 07-09-2011, 08:04 AM
RE: Melancholia - by addy - 07-09-2011, 09:29 AM
RE: Melancholia - by heslopian - 07-09-2011, 10:19 AM
RE: Melancholia - by addy - 07-11-2011, 08:37 AM
RE: Melancholia - by heslopian - 07-11-2011, 08:42 AM
RE: Melancholia - by billy - 07-11-2011, 10:07 AM
RE: Melancholia - by heslopian - 07-11-2011, 10:10 AM
RE: Melancholia - by Todd - 07-13-2011, 12:53 AM
RE: Melancholia - by heslopian - 07-13-2011, 01:09 AM
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