it's a young girl, if she were a women she'd be 100 plus, there's no mention of poverty, the huge fire is often a symbol of wealth. one does not a collection make 
lalique perfume bottles were sold quite cheaply now and then, some also came free when you bought the perfume. welcome gave away lalique with it's perfume, my partner has a cut crystal one and we're not wealthy. i paid 4 pounds sterling for it, it's worth about 120 top end and about 70 barginside. in the 30's dependig where you live, young girls were taught quilt making. even in rich families
the tiffy wasn't a reference but a simile (like 'her eyes shone like diamonds', cliché but often said of old peoples eyes) 2nd hand perfume can also be had cheaply and again while, as i said, we're not wealthy my partner has about ten high end perfumes including a very expensive largerfeld. and a few decent diamonds.
i'm certainly not justifying myself though it seems that way :hysterical. so please don't think me vain or full of ego
thanks for a good and thoughtful crit, and i promise to weigh your input carefully, i'll def do something with the volcano on an edit, more than one person has picked up on it.
most of all thanks for the time you spent on it.
i just sent Aish a pm saying;
i just re read my response and it's scandalous, i should have just thanked you, sorry Aish.
lalique perfume bottles were sold quite cheaply now and then, some also came free when you bought the perfume. welcome gave away lalique with it's perfume, my partner has a cut crystal one and we're not wealthy. i paid 4 pounds sterling for it, it's worth about 120 top end and about 70 barginside. in the 30's dependig where you live, young girls were taught quilt making. even in rich familiesthe tiffy wasn't a reference but a simile (like 'her eyes shone like diamonds', cliché but often said of old peoples eyes) 2nd hand perfume can also be had cheaply and again while, as i said, we're not wealthy my partner has about ten high end perfumes including a very expensive largerfeld. and a few decent diamonds.
i'm certainly not justifying myself though it seems that way :hysterical. so please don't think me vain or full of ego
thanks for a good and thoughtful crit, and i promise to weigh your input carefully, i'll def do something with the volcano on an edit, more than one person has picked up on it.
most of all thanks for the time you spent on it.
i just sent Aish a pm saying;
i just re read my response and it's scandalous, i should have just thanked you, sorry Aish.