07-09-2011, 02:38 PM
Odin is the Norse God who ruled Asgard, He is associated with war, victory, death, battle, magic, wisdom, and prophecy.
(07-07-2011, 02:32 PM)jadielue Wrote: Oden-esque feathers, decrepit of vision and liquor.
Always on the outs with another floozy bird turned
grey. Sorry, I am not keen on your opening two lines. They seem erroneous and out of place.I don't recall the night this week, only street-
lights aglow with reflections. The elderly passing,
seemingly weightless together, twined, heart in hand
as they slow to a brisk step or two. This is a beautiful image, I love seeing elderly couples who are at ONE with each other. And the teens,
the weathered years. Weathered years is more demonstrative of the elderly couple.They always seem to change
so quickly, mostly for the worst, but there's always
better. Somewhere. Is 'Somewhere' necessary?They, heart in pocket, hand in
hand, run to where they're going. The unheard of.
That place.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?