Melancholia
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Thank you all for your feedback and kind words. Addy, would the last line of the penultimate verse make more grammatical sense if I separated "any" and "thing" into stand alone words?
I'm glad you found the poem wonderfully horrible LeanneSmile
And thanks again Aish for introducing me to the Mogen David! I learn all the time.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Melancholia - by heslopian - 07-09-2011, 03:13 AM
RE: Melancholia - by Aish - 07-09-2011, 04:39 AM
RE: Melancholia - by Leanne - 07-09-2011, 08:04 AM
RE: Melancholia - by addy - 07-09-2011, 09:29 AM
RE: Melancholia - by heslopian - 07-09-2011, 10:19 AM
RE: Melancholia - by addy - 07-11-2011, 08:37 AM
RE: Melancholia - by heslopian - 07-11-2011, 08:42 AM
RE: Melancholia - by billy - 07-11-2011, 10:07 AM
RE: Melancholia - by heslopian - 07-11-2011, 10:10 AM
RE: Melancholia - by Todd - 07-13-2011, 12:53 AM
RE: Melancholia - by heslopian - 07-13-2011, 01:09 AM



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