07-09-2011, 10:19 AM
Thank you all for your feedback and kind words. Addy, would the last line of the penultimate verse make more grammatical sense if I separated "any" and "thing" into stand alone words?
I'm glad you found the poem wonderfully horrible Leanne
And thanks again Aish for introducing me to the Mogen David! I learn all the time.
I'm glad you found the poem wonderfully horrible Leanne

And thanks again Aish for introducing me to the Mogen David! I learn all the time.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

