Propelled
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(07-09-2011, 08:07 AM)Aish Wrote:  Thank you both!

If I leave out 'in', I won't have enough syllables. Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...
hi aish, the 5,7,5, form is just a western idea and not adhering to it is allowed. one of the best references i've read concerning the form is;
as long as it can be read in a normal breath it's okay.

basho and others, when there haiku are translated often use less or more.
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Propelled - by Aish - 07-08-2011, 01:17 PM
RE: Propelled - by billy - 07-08-2011, 02:25 PM
RE: Propelled - by Aish - 07-08-2011, 02:31 PM
RE: Propelled - by Leanne - 07-09-2011, 06:42 AM
RE: Propelled - by Aish - 07-09-2011, 08:07 AM
RE: Propelled - by billy - 07-09-2011, 08:28 AM
RE: Propelled - by Leanne - 07-09-2011, 08:11 AM
RE: Propelled - by Aish - 07-09-2011, 01:41 PM
RE: Propelled - by billy - 07-18-2011, 10:37 AM



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