New Poem

[billy]

Thanks!
In fact, I might just scrap this poem. It does sound very cliche, like you said.
Maybe I'll work on that other poem I posted on yahoo....Thanks!

for what its worth. here's a quote;
paul valery;
A poem is never finished, only abandoned.

even if you use just a small part of
the poem, don't abandon it. the poem has potential.
if you abandon it, you may get into the habit of abandoning every poem
put it away for a while by all means but don't scrap it.

why can't you work on two poems at once, or even a 100.