Adorn

[addy]

Ooh, I like the structure you used for this piece... it suggests a steady, droning bleakness you have to look through and dramatically belies the heart of the piece. Expertly done. One of my favorites from you, even . I'm afraid I have very little I could comment on

Oden-esque feathers I'm afraid i don't get the reference , decrepit of vision and liquor.
Always on the outs with another floozy bird turned
grey. I don't recall the night this week, only street-
lights aglow with reflections. The elderly passing,
seemingly weightless together love this bit, twined, heart in hand
as they slow to a brisk step or two. And the teens,
the weathered years. They always seem to change
so quickly, mostly for the worst, but there's always
better. Somewhere. Nice fluorish They, heart in pocket, hand in
hand nice twist to "heart in hand", run to where they're going. The unheard of.
That place.