Walls

[addy]

Love the quiet, intimate tension here, the immediateness of it. Not much I can comment on really.

Hands overhead,
wholly missing your
place between my
covers, our bed. "my covers, our bed" is an awesome line

Tensing, and teasing,
rising, falling. Breaths Very nice
like shadows bloom
on the ceiling.

What more do I need
to affix your body here?
Step by step by step,
gravel gravel? is this in a bedroom? snapping, tongues
twisting, fingers biting
prints across bare thighs.

Brads, tacks, and screws this is just one example of what I like in your style here... you constantly color the setting with he same tension (the walls, ceiling, etc)
pinching. Renting themselves
from our humid walls.