(02-10-2010, 02:57 PM)Larry Wrote: Haha!i know addy is doing a comment to the poem, shes in the other room lol.
I recently turned 18, and I suppose that is the age where most people leave the "angst" stage. Man, do I know what you mean! When I see the word "razor" or "bleed" or "pool of tears" in any poem, I vomit in my mouth a bit
I like this forum, and will continue to use it. I'll be sure to check out some other poems, and give a word or two.
Thanks!
its nice to see you posting it in the serious critique forum as well.
and always remember you don't have to use what's been said. you (the poet) always has the final edit
don't worry too much about replying though they will be welcome. you can also post poetry in any of the poetry forums as i'm sure you know.
looks like she beat me to it
