Got It Good

[billy]

Thanks Billy -- since I use golden in the last stanza, it seems redundant to use it in the first as well, plus it wouldn't fit into the rhythm I have stuck in my head, but that's only in my head and not yours so I can understand the dilemma

Many thanks for your comment.

me bad, i read the golden eagles line as eagles without the 'golden'. i actually went through the poem a good few times as well. it does go to show that not all feedback is good feedback and that those giving it are just as prone to miss things as the one who writes the poem is. sorry