07-04-2011, 06:10 PM
Thank you both for your great feedback
The object of the lines in brackets was to set the scene and put my nana and I in context. I'll have a think about how I can improve that and the ending later.
The object of the lines in brackets was to set the scene and put my nana and I in context. I'll have a think about how I can improve that and the ending later.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe