Stitches

[addy]

Welcome Aish ... great to see another poet here

This is some good stuff. I think you've got a deft instinct as a writer... it has beauty and originality. Nicely done.

I have learned to hear farther
than abrasive tongues love the way you phrased this
and vulgarity,
from out deep, agonized mumbles.

As a soul readjusts,
pushes boundaries,
becomes calm. I think this part needs a good image.

Sometimes the sun,
reckless,
chews before digestion. My favorite part

Fallen
hands never idle,
overworked and asunder:

My demon lover, unfortunately, pop culture has made this line a little cliche, so it might be all right to rephrase it
torn apart
and reassembled.
Satin stitches
adorn a growling brow. I like the dissonance/ tension you put in these last lines.