Stitches

Stitches

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07-04-2011, 03:34 PM

I am biased, but I like it Wink

I would perhaps put "made" back in as it was, but it does work ending at asunder... actually, it might work better with the metaphor, since you're tearing the poem at that point...

Anyone who says "all ideas are welcome" is unbelievably welcome here.

It could be worse

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Stitches - by Aish - 07-04-2011, 03:10 PM

RE: Stitches - by Leanne - 07-04-2011, 03:16 PM

RE: Stitches - by Aish - 07-04-2011, 03:27 PM

RE: Stitches - by Leanne - 07-04-2011, 03:29 PM

RE: Stitches - by Aish - 07-04-2011, 03:30 PM

RE: Stitches - by Leanne - 07-04-2011, 03:34 PM

RE: Stitches - by billy - 07-04-2011, 03:37 PM

RE: Stitches - by billy - 07-04-2011, 03:39 PM

RE: Stitches - by Leanne - 07-04-2011, 03:42 PM

RE: Stitches - by Aish - 07-04-2011, 03:49 PM

RE: Stitches - by billy - 07-04-2011, 03:50 PM

RE: Stitches - by Aish - 07-04-2011, 03:54 PM

RE: Stitches - by Leanne - 07-04-2011, 04:02 PM

RE: Stitches - by billy - 07-04-2011, 03:56 PM

RE: Stitches - by Aish - 07-04-2011, 03:59 PM

RE: Stitches - by billy - 07-04-2011, 04:02 PM

RE: Stitches - by Aish - 07-04-2011, 04:06 PM

RE: Stitches - by Leanne - 07-04-2011, 04:11 PM

RE: Stitches - by billy - 07-04-2011, 04:12 PM

RE: Stitches - by addy - 07-04-2011, 04:35 PM

RE: Stitches - by Aish - 07-04-2011, 04:39 PM

RE: Stitches - by addy - 07-05-2011, 02:34 PM

RE: Stitches - by Leanne - 07-04-2011, 06:24 PM

RE: Stitches - by Leanne - 07-04-2011, 06:33 PM

RE: Stitches - by heslopian - 07-04-2011, 07:51 PM

RE: Stitches - by Aish - 07-05-2011, 06:34 AM

RE: Stitches - by Leanne - 07-05-2011, 02:52 PM

RE: Stitches - by Aish - 07-07-2011, 02:55 PM

RE: Stitches - by Leanne - 07-07-2011, 02:59 PM

RE: Stitches - by billy - 07-07-2011, 03:01 PM

RE: Stitches - by Aish - 07-07-2011, 03:14 PM

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