07-03-2011, 03:12 PM
seriously, i laughed at the last 2 seconds when you wasn't sure if it had ended 
as for the reading. it was excellent. it did sound a little strange talking of your cunny but it didn't screw the poem up. you got the female POV across really well jack. and i could hear the shotguns outside the windows of the stately home, can't believe i missed this gem.
as for the reading. it was excellent. it did sound a little strange talking of your cunny but it didn't screw the poem up. you got the female POV across really well jack. and i could hear the shotguns outside the windows of the stately home, can't believe i missed this gem.