06-30-2011, 10:16 PM
Todd
You have some good stuff here and some fluff.
Would have liked more characters from Wonderland to appear in this person. "Wonderland delusion."
Not sure when you wrote this but "Underland" is more up to date with the Red Queen, Jabberwocky and such, with a more mature patient as Alice is in her return visit.
I think the psychiatric notes are need because this is a psychiatric transcript. The other way of doing it would involve only observations
from the psychiatrist, with a lead in of a stanza where the patient is talking.
This has a lot of potential
Just my opinion
David
You have some good stuff here and some fluff.
Would have liked more characters from Wonderland to appear in this person. "Wonderland delusion."
Not sure when you wrote this but "Underland" is more up to date with the Red Queen, Jabberwocky and such, with a more mature patient as Alice is in her return visit.
I think the psychiatric notes are need because this is a psychiatric transcript. The other way of doing it would involve only observations
from the psychiatrist, with a lead in of a stanza where the patient is talking.
This has a lot of potential
Just my opinion
David