06-30-2011, 05:45 PM
not quite a cleave poem but you've added an extra dimension.
with the edit, it has more clarity for me as well. would you consider making the main body of the body bold
in order to visually differentiate the shrink and alice. apart from that nit i can't see as i can give any constructive feedback.
nice edit todd.
with the edit, it has more clarity for me as well. would you consider making the main body of the body bold
in order to visually differentiate the shrink and alice. apart from that nit i can't see as i can give any constructive feedback.
nice edit todd.