06-30-2011, 09:07 AM
Thank you for the feedback Leanne, I love your re-write. Much more Shakespearean than my original revision
When I next try a sonnet I'll do it your way.
Thanks too for your feedback David, all constructive criticism is very helpful
When I next try a sonnet I'll do it your way.Thanks too for your feedback David, all constructive criticism is very helpful
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe