Revised: The Undiscovered Country
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Thank you for the feedback and kind words guysSmile This is the first sonnet I really had fun composing, so I may try it again. I think it may have helped to write a free verse poem first and then convert it into form, like building a house based on blueprints.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Revised: The Undiscovered Country - by heslopian - 06-28-2011, 07:01 PM
RE: Revised: The Undiscovered Country - by addy - 06-29-2011, 09:03 AM
RE: Revised: The Undiscovered Country - by billy - 06-29-2011, 09:07 AM
RE: Revised: The Undiscovered Country - by heslopian - 06-29-2011, 11:26 AM
RE: Revised: The Undiscovered Country - by billy - 06-29-2011, 01:19 PM
RE: Revised: The Undiscovered Country - by Leanne - 06-29-2011, 11:54 AM
RE: Revised: The Undiscovered Country - by Leanne - 06-30-2011, 04:49 AM



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