06-28-2011, 03:36 PM
It's interesting enough, and good writing practise, but it's definitely impossible to critique as poetry 
It's even a little bit tricky to critique as prose, since it's just flashes. Looks like you've stumbled onto the perfect formula -- a way of writing that nobody can properly criticise!
It's even a little bit tricky to critique as prose, since it's just flashes. Looks like you've stumbled onto the perfect formula -- a way of writing that nobody can properly criticise!
It could be worse