06-28-2011, 05:35 AM
I love the humility, Ris -- the bloke's carrying something priceless and otherworldly (in the eyes of those who would care about such things) and he's bothered by the fact that he's wasting a bit of cloth! Then again, the shabby rag could well mean his own flesh. For me, I think you could probably do without the fourth line completely and just have:
My bare foot' prints
Stain with boiling blood
As we already know he's on a road, from the first line.
This is intriguing, and we love a good skull mystery of course!
My bare foot' prints
Stain with boiling blood
As we already know he's on a road, from the first line.
This is intriguing, and we love a good skull mystery of course!
It could be worse
