06-28-2011, 12:17 AM
Ris Yerg
I have trouble reading poems where every line is capitalized. Seems like it's always a new thought or sentence.
There is nothing wrong with it and it is acceptable but it confuses me.
A heaven road's covered.....reads awkward to me
With the earthly dust.
My bare foot' prints
On the deserted road
Stain with boiling blood,....maybe stained
Despair and pain.
A loincloth and a yellow
Skull of the unknown saint...can't place the yellow skull, need more info
Are my the only possessions.
I have never liked the luxury.
Why do I need this shabby rag
If I knew what the skull represented I would probably understand because it seems to me you are giving up something and keeping only what you need.
Sorry I'm so dense
David
I have trouble reading poems where every line is capitalized. Seems like it's always a new thought or sentence.
There is nothing wrong with it and it is acceptable but it confuses me.
A heaven road's covered.....reads awkward to me
With the earthly dust.
My bare foot' prints
On the deserted road
Stain with boiling blood,....maybe stained
Despair and pain.
A loincloth and a yellow
Skull of the unknown saint...can't place the yellow skull, need more info
Are my the only possessions.
I have never liked the luxury.
Why do I need this shabby rag
If I knew what the skull represented I would probably understand because it seems to me you are giving up something and keeping only what you need.
Sorry I'm so dense
David