06-15-2011, 10:09 AM
Leanne, I should apologise for having just written one line on the 'serious' thread -- I had overlooked that. I am sure you will bring it home to port one day, as it is part of your story, and also has a universal ' condition humaine' aspect. (Must stop using that.) There is perhaps more of you in this than you think: the tinkering to get it better, the ambiguity to prohibit, in the words of the Qur'an, anything to show, except that which shows. Now there was a man who would have understood you!
Now, perhaps if you were to write out to intention in simple prose first......no, perhaps not...
Now, perhaps if you were to write out to intention in simple prose first......no, perhaps not...

