06-14-2011, 04:19 PM
I love the combination of the form and it's effect on your... ummm.... less than urbane subject matter 
. Great edit... nothing else really to correct form-wise and as for content it's an awesome, hilarious read. Well done.
. Great edit... nothing else really to correct form-wise and as for content it's an awesome, hilarious read. Well done.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?