My Father:
#4
I love the combination of the form and it's effect on your... ummm.... less than urbane subject matter Big Grin. Great edit... nothing else really to correct form-wise and as for content it's an awesome, hilarious read. Well done.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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My Father: - by billy - 06-10-2011, 06:57 PM
RE: My Father: - by Leanne - 06-11-2011, 06:12 AM
RE: My Father: - by billy - 06-11-2011, 08:19 AM
RE: My Father: - by addy - 06-14-2011, 04:19 PM
RE: My Father: - by billy - 06-15-2011, 10:37 AM



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