06-11-2011, 08:37 AM
i like it.
i like the elusion (is that the right words) to Leda and co, instead of using their names.
if i had one really small nit on a really good piece it would be that prime made me instantly think of transformers
(it's probably just the sc fi nut in me) but i'm not saying it needs to be changed.
i often read of greeks and their mythology yet know little about it to do one myself.
the use of the refrain is excellent.
thanks for the read.
i like the elusion (is that the right words) to Leda and co, instead of using their names.
if i had one really small nit on a really good piece it would be that prime made me instantly think of transformers
(it's probably just the sc fi nut in me) but i'm not saying it needs to be changed.
i often read of greeks and their mythology yet know little about it to do one myself.
the use of the refrain is excellent.
thanks for the read.