06-11-2011, 08:19 AM
concider the edit done.
my grammar suck and i seriously do try and make it work when i do a poem,
so i'm grateful for the help on that side as well.
thanks for the feedback.
i'll force myself to do a free verse next hehe.
my grammar suck and i seriously do try and make it work when i do a poem,
so i'm grateful for the help on that side as well.
thanks for the feedback.
i'll force myself to do a free verse next hehe.