Nightmare on My Street
#5
great write Todd, i'm envious.

about the iambic tetrameter, again i'm really struggling.

i scan the first line as;
da--dum----dum----da---da--dum-da-dum
As knives / stretch from/ your fing/ er tips,
when said aloud i get the same stress for stretch as i do for knives.
i really want to understand how to tell the difference.

and line 8 as;
--da-da-dum---da--da-dum--da dum
Could I / please die /be fore / I wake?

is it possible for the syllable 'I' to be both stressed and unstressed in an iambic foot? if so i have no chance of getting my head round it.


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Nightmare on My Street - by Todd - 06-09-2011, 11:44 AM
RE: Kyrielle: My Nightmare on My Street - by Todd - 06-09-2011, 12:42 PM
RE: Kyrielle: My Nightmare on My Street - by billy - 06-09-2011, 01:35 PM
RE: Kyrielle: My Nightmare on My Street - by Todd - 06-09-2011, 06:42 PM
RE: Kyrielle: My Nightmare on My Street - by Todd - 06-09-2011, 07:16 PM



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