06-09-2011, 10:48 AM
the revision though mild helps the flow, i'm glad you changed the flicks
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First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1) - by Jack_MH - 06-09-2011, 04:33 AM
RE: First poem, any thoughts? - by Leanne - 06-09-2011, 04:52 AM
RE: First poem, any thoughts? - by Jack_MH - 06-09-2011, 04:59 AM
RE: First poem, any thoughts? - by billy - 06-09-2011, 05:44 AM
RE: First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1) - by Jack_MH - 06-09-2011, 05:53 AM
RE: First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1) - by addy - 06-09-2011, 09:34 AM
RE: First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1) - by billy - 06-09-2011, 10:48 AM
RE: First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1) - by Leanne - 06-09-2011, 12:13 PM
RE: First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1) - by kath3 - 06-09-2011, 02:39 PM
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