First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1)
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It took me several re-reads to really appreciate this piece. I love the unique thoughts you put into it... there's something active yet at the same time passive about achieving peace, like maybe it just happens when we're too damned tired to fight anymore?

I love pieces that make me think. Thanks for sharing Smile
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1) - by Jack_MH - 06-09-2011, 04:33 AM
RE: First poem, any thoughts? - by Leanne - 06-09-2011, 04:52 AM
RE: First poem, any thoughts? - by Jack_MH - 06-09-2011, 04:59 AM
RE: First poem, any thoughts? - by billy - 06-09-2011, 05:44 AM
RE: First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1) - by Jack_MH - 06-09-2011, 05:53 AM
RE: First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1) - by addy - 06-09-2011, 09:34 AM
RE: First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1) - by billy - 06-09-2011, 10:48 AM
RE: First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1) - by kath3 - 06-09-2011, 02:39 PM



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