First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1)

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First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1)

Jack_MH
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06-09-2011, 04:33 AM

Trauma… peace?
A Thousand differences; lost.
Longing; I close my eyes.
Breathing in rhythmic deep,
exhaling violence
some would hate,
resist?
Not me

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First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1) - by Jack_MH - 06-09-2011, 04:33 AM

RE: First poem, any thoughts? - by Leanne - 06-09-2011, 04:52 AM

RE: First poem, any thoughts? - by Jack_MH - 06-09-2011, 04:59 AM

RE: First poem, any thoughts? - by billy - 06-09-2011, 05:44 AM

RE: First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1) - by Jack_MH - 06-09-2011, 05:53 AM

RE: First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1) - by addy - 06-09-2011, 09:34 AM

RE: First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1) - by billy - 06-09-2011, 10:48 AM

RE: First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1) - by Leanne - 06-09-2011, 12:13 PM

RE: First poem, any thoughts? (Edit 1) - by kath3 - 06-09-2011, 02:39 PM

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