I could kick myself... Repeatedly

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I could kick myself... Repeatedly

billy Offline

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06-08-2011, 05:58 PM

i think it could be helped with a small edit to lose some of the unneeded words; just to trim it down a little.
the meat of the peace is okay.
thanks for the read.

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I could kick myself... Repeatedly - by violet - 06-08-2011, 04:37 PM

RE: I could kick myself... Repeatedly - by billy - 06-08-2011, 05:58 PM

RE: I could kick myself... Repeatedly - by billy - 06-09-2011, 05:30 AM

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