06-08-2011, 05:50 PM
again for me this a good narrative/confessional poem.
with some great lines. and some really good imagery.
i made sure my journey was long;
tied in beautifully with the sadness of the last
7 lines.
for me this has more quality as a poem than just a simple piece of prose. i can't believe
the difference between the two prose piece of yours i've read so far and the poems.
sad as the write is, i loved it.
thanks for the read, don't forget to try your hand at a few comments on some of the poetry posted
with some great lines. and some really good imagery.
i made sure my journey was long;
tied in beautifully with the sadness of the last
7 lines.
for me this has more quality as a poem than just a simple piece of prose. i can't believe
the difference between the two prose piece of yours i've read so far and the poems.
sad as the write is, i loved it.
thanks for the read, don't forget to try your hand at a few comments on some of the poetry posted