The Dance
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No, don't remove any, just be prepared for us to take a while to get to them -- full critiques take time and brain power, both of which are often in short supply Smile

This is an interesting piece on first glance and although I don't have the time to critique just now, I look forward to giving it a proper going-over.
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The Dance - by Cthonian - 06-07-2011, 06:21 PM
RE: The Dance - by billy - 06-07-2011, 06:33 PM
RE: The Dance - by Cthonian - 06-07-2011, 06:35 PM
RE: The Dance - by Leanne - 06-08-2011, 04:55 AM
RE: The Dance - by addy - 06-08-2011, 03:02 PM
RE: The Dance - by Cthonian - 06-08-2011, 07:57 PM
RE: The Dance - by addy - 06-09-2011, 09:46 AM



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