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Grief
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#9
06-07-2011, 06:38 PM
I love the term "mortal port." I enjoyed this very much Jack. I feel the despair and regret (especially at the "bare albums" - a line that really touched me) in the verse. Great!
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Grief - by heslopian - 05-25-2011, 02:52 AM
RE: Grief - by ficosdarkness - 05-25-2011, 04:42 AM
RE: Grief - by kath3 - 05-26-2011, 05:30 AM
RE: Grief - by billy - 05-26-2011, 09:14 AM
RE: Grief - by heslopian - 05-26-2011, 12:33 PM
RE: Grief - by billy - 05-30-2011, 09:56 AM
RE: Grief - by heslopian - 05-30-2011, 10:50 AM
RE: Grief - by addy - 05-30-2011, 12:27 PM
RE: Grief - by Cthonian - 06-07-2011, 06:38 PM
RE: Grief - by abu nuwas - 06-08-2011, 07:12 PM
RE: Grief - by billy - 06-09-2011, 10:53 AM
RE: Grief - by heslopian - 06-09-2011, 08:46 PM
RE: Grief - by critical mass - 06-24-2011, 03:37 PM



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