The Dance
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i have to cook dinner now but i'll reply to the poems tomorrow.

if you can try and d, (let's say) 1 or 2 a day in order to garner responses.
by all means do 1 or 2 a day in the mild feedback as well if you wish.
if you can, try and reply to some of the other poems. just be honest and say why you like or why it doesn't work. don't worry about getting anything wrong. like poetry feedback is an acquired skill. Big Grin
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The Dance - by Cthonian - 06-07-2011, 06:21 PM
RE: The Dance - by billy - 06-07-2011, 06:33 PM
RE: The Dance - by Cthonian - 06-07-2011, 06:35 PM
RE: The Dance - by Leanne - 06-08-2011, 04:55 AM
RE: The Dance - by addy - 06-08-2011, 03:02 PM
RE: The Dance - by Cthonian - 06-08-2011, 07:57 PM
RE: The Dance - by addy - 06-09-2011, 09:46 AM



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