06-07-2011, 05:56 PM
Thank you again for the critique Billy. Can you tell me more about this "show, don't tell" perhaps? Please correct me if I'm mistaken, but do you suggest "showing" (i.e. explaining the crooked nature of the megalith) rather than "telling (i.e. presenting the image without an explanation)? I am curious and I feel I have a lot to learn.
Also, I am new here so I just wanted to check if it's okay to post a few of my poems in the critique boards so that I may collect the feedback and suggestions for myself to spend an afternoon revising my pieces? Thank you.
Also, I am new here so I just wanted to check if it's okay to post a few of my poems in the critique boards so that I may collect the feedback and suggestions for myself to spend an afternoon revising my pieces? Thank you.