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06-06-2011, 10:24 AM

Nice nightmarish vibe to this. Love that ending, that flips the narrator from bystander to something else. Thanks for the read Smile

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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"Bridge." - by Ris Yerg - 06-05-2011, 06:25 PM

RE: "Bridge." - by addy - 06-06-2011, 10:24 AM

RE: "Bridge." - by Ris Yerg - 06-06-2011, 09:59 PM

RE: "Bridge." - by Cthonian - 06-07-2011, 05:25 PM

RE: "Bridge." - by Ris Yerg - 06-07-2011, 05:43 PM

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