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06-06-2011, 09:53 AM

Smile

Toenail does work better actually.

Thoroughbred, in my accent (well, the accent I use when I need to totally Oz it up), sounds like thurra-BREAD, which gives me an extra pun if I'm reading it aloud.

The first line of the last stanza has been changed a few times and I haven't settled on something I like yet. I might try "one fine day". Hmm. It always makes me happy when people pick up the problems I've had myself. Many thanks!

It could be worse

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Villanelle contest - by heslopian - 11-07-2010, 07:18 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by billy - 11-07-2010, 07:30 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by Todd - 11-07-2010, 10:52 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by heslopian - 11-07-2010, 12:18 PM

RE: Villanelle contest - by billy - 11-08-2010, 05:25 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by Todd - 11-07-2010, 12:51 PM

RE: Villanelle contest - by heslopian - 11-08-2010, 03:15 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by billy - 11-08-2010, 01:19 PM

RE: Villanelle contest - by billy - 11-08-2010, 05:13 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by heslopian - 11-08-2010, 05:39 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by billy - 11-08-2010, 01:11 PM

RE: Villanelle contest - by heslopian - 11-08-2010, 08:01 PM

RE: Villanelle contest - by Lawrence - 11-10-2010, 10:52 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by billy - 11-10-2010, 11:57 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by Lawrence - 11-17-2010, 01:39 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by heslopian - 11-17-2010, 01:53 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by Lawrence - 11-17-2010, 01:56 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by billy - 11-17-2010, 05:33 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by Lawrence - 01-26-2011, 04:39 PM

RE: Villanelle contest - by billy - 01-28-2011, 10:37 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by LiteraryAntiquity - 02-07-2011, 06:28 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by billy - 02-07-2011, 09:55 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by LiteraryAntiquity - 02-07-2011, 07:49 PM

RE: Villanelle contest - by billy - 02-10-2011, 05:49 PM

RE: Villanelle contest - by Leanne - 06-06-2011, 05:12 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by billy - 06-06-2011, 09:35 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by Leanne - 06-06-2011, 09:53 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by billy - 06-06-2011, 09:57 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by Leanne - 06-06-2011, 09:59 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by billy - 06-06-2011, 10:12 AM

RE: Villanelle contest - by Leanne - 06-06-2011, 10:19 AM

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