06-05-2011, 11:43 AM
Couple of spelling nits: I think you meant "our food" in the second line, and "There'll" in the third. Other than that this is a cute little piece. Not too poetic on its own but when put in the context of the title quietly witty. Do you need the line break after "wonder" though?
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

